Synopsis: Something has gone horribly wrong. A desperate move on Jack’s part makes Riddick aware of it… and of how much she really means to him.
Category: Fan Fiction
Fandom: Pitch Black (2000)
Orientation: Het (Plot)
Warnings: Controversial Subject Matter (Suicide, Attempted Suicide, Mental Illness), Sexual Situations, Harsh Language, Graphic Violence / Gore, Death
Number of Chapters: 4
Net Word Count:18,468
Total Word Count:18,785
Story Length: Novelette
First Posted: April 8, 2002
Last Updated: July 25, 2004
The characters and events of Pitch Black are © 2000 USA Films, Gramercy Pictures, and Interscope Communications; Directed by David Twohy; Screenplay by Ken and Jim Wheat and David Twohy; Story by Ken and Jim Wheat; Produced by Tom Engelman. This work of fan fiction is a transformative work for entertainment purposes only, with no claims on, nor intent to infringe upon, the rights of the parties listed above. All additional characters and situations are the creation of, and remain the property of, Ardath Rekha. eBook design and cover art by LaraRebooted, using a screen capture from Pitch Black, the Nightmare font from Font Meme, and background graphics © 1998 Noel Mollon, adapted and licensed via Teri Williams Carnright from the now-retired Fantasyland Graphics site (c. 2003). This eBook may not be sold or advertised for sale. If you are a copyright holder of any of the referenced works, and believe that part or all of this eBook exceeds fair use practices under the Digital Millennium Copyright Act, please contact Ardath Rekha.
PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE!!!!!GIVE US MORE TO THIS STORY! WE, AS IN MY FRIEND AND I REALLLLYY NEED TO SEE MORE OF THIS STORY! GET TO IT!!!
That is really really good. I can’t wait to read the next part. Please please update soon.
I adore this story. I love how Riddick has put himself in danger for Jack. I know she is young, but not that young. I was sorry that Imam died — I really do like his character and his influence on Riddick. Please continue. I have worries about the Doc’s sister — she could cause problems, I am just not sure what kind. Are they going to have to return to the hateful planet? What will they find if that is the case? Please, I cannot stand the suspense!
I don’t think there is a story that you’ve written that I haven’t enjoyed. You have a wonderful imagination, and your plots are so well thought out. I just don’t know why I insist on subjecting myself to unfinished pieces. When can we expect the next installment.
hello! I love this story. It is the third best of your PB-fics in my opinion (Apprentice and the Slow Burn come first 🙂 ). I really wish you would write more to this story and tell me how things are going to work out. BTW your site ROCKS! -And it’s really beautiful too…